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KFreshJewels

Posts: 3

Posted: 12.05.2009 at 15.47
Hey fellow fashionista's. We just relaunched our website for the exclusive line of trendy jewelry The Diaphani Collection. This is acrylic jewelry with real Swarovski Crystals. I'm just looking for some feedback for the website.

http://www.kfreshjewels.com

Thanks,

Kirsten

Allan

Posts: 11209

Posted: 12.05.2009 at 16.58
I like the way the top menu works but I think that the top logo could use a little work. The Diamond looks it's missing a sparkle where it's got a black chunk missing and it looks like it's been stretched.

The site itself looks like it's missing a bit of the polish of your product photos which are great.
Posted: 12.05.2009 at 19.52
You should look into rewriting some of your title tags.
You're going for genric words which high levels of competetion, also look at (if possible) putting better title tags on your product sections.
People will rarely search for "r101" but may be more inclined to search for something like "onxy and crystal ring".
See if you can expand the product description to include some of your keywords, just don't make it too spammy.

It's good to see you have Google Analytics installed on your site. It's an important tool in tracking who your visitors are and what they do.

Tania

Posts: 7070

Posted: 12.05.2009 at 23.57
Great advice on keywords from WR. Also agreed with Allan - the product photos are fantastic quality and look great, the top banner doesn't quite match up to the standard and could be a little sharper.

Good luck :)

KFreshJewels

Posts: 3

Posted: 13.05.2009 at 07.02
Thanks to everyone for the great feedback. Great ideas that I will start working on right away. What did you think of the product? Thanks again!!!

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